Allison64Lee's profile
AGE:
15
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 08
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 08
My name is Allison and I am fifteen years old. I really enjoy writing, running, and watching movies. Most of my stories will have a serious theme to them, but on occasion there may be some exceptions. I hope you like my stories and please don’t steal the plot, I work very hard on what I write.
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Let The Piano Play ... It's so silent. There is no sound. It's a silence so lonesome it's almost frightening. My mind is going crazy, craving for someone to speak. What is even more frightening is when the sound finally came after my ears had adjusted. The usual quietness of the day was interrupted by the sound of the door downstairs banging open against the wall, making me wonder in surprise if someone was finally going to wander into this forgotten room. I paused for a momen...
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That was beautifully written. The dog's friend died though! (I think) That was sad. I really liked how you made it from the dog's perspective. Good story.
When I started reading this I could not stop. You are an amazing writer and I like your style, I did not find any grammar errors. Good job with your story- it was really enjoyable.
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Your writing style flows very well. You are a good writer and I enjoyed reading your story, if you add more I will be sure to read it. I did not find any grammar mistakes and overall it was sweet. Great job!
lol I like this. It's kind of funny the simplicity of it. I hope they choose this one because it's just so unexpected.
Wholy crap. That scared the living daylights out of me. That was a very good story and I'm not used to scary stories so I was all like "Eeeeeeeek!" But yeah...it had lot's of suspence so no complaints from me. There was some grammar mistakes but otherwise it was great. Great job! oh! And I also liked your writing method. It was very neat.
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