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AGE:
14
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 28
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 28
Hi my name is Allison and I am 14 years old. I have brown hair and brown eyes. I love to draw and sometimes write. I have a black cat named Jasmine, a blacklab/? mix dog named Rufus, a Salamander named Sally (I know, typical right?) and a boxer/goldenlab named Lady. I also love to watch anime and go running.
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Let The Piano Play ... It's so silent. There's no sound. It's a silence so lonesome it's almost frightening. Your mind is going crazy, craving for someone to speak. What's even more frightening is when the sound finally comes after your ears have adjusted. The usual quietness of the day was interrupted by the sound of the door downstairs banging open against the wall, making me wonder in surprise if someone was finally going to wonder into this forgotten room. I paused for a moment to ...
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CHAPTER 1: Rasberry Icecream! "Hiya Pops!" Akisa said as she leaned forward on the countertop where people got their orders of icecream. "Hello Akisa!" Pop's smiled giving her a toothy grin. There was that goofy, sweet, gentle smile again. The one that got her grinning like a maniac too. "What are you doing out here so late? You're usually here early in the mornin' talkin' to me fer hours. Had me worried." He handed Akisa her rasberry icecream, her daily order, as she continued talking to him...
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Wholy crap. That scared the living daylights out of me. That was a very good story and I'm not used to scary stories so I was all like "Eeeeeeeek!" But yeah...it had lot's of suspence so no complaints from me. There was some grammar mistakes but otherwise it was great. Great job! oh! And I also liked your writing method. It was very neat.
I can't even tell you how much of a good poem this is! I totally understood it all. The metiphores and word chices were great. Two thumbs up for you!
WHOAH! AWESOMMMMEEE!!!! That would make a wonderful song. ^^ Great lyrics and a very nice story line behind it. I wish I knew the beat and such so I could hear what the song would sound like...oh well. Good job though!
Wow this was really great! I like the ending lines the best: "Tebogo is dead, but they can sing. They can still sing." Something about it just seemed really inspiring.
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