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AGE:
21
LOC: Salem, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 18
LOC: Salem, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 18
Why I’m here
Hi,I joined this site because I love both reading and composing creative writing . unfortunately I can only write poetry songs sometimes,and the occasional short children’s story. I have problems with story endings as well as song endings which is why I don’t write them often or at least finish then that is.I write mostly as a way to relieve intense emotions or to sort out confusing things although occasionally I write just cause I feel creative.
However that doesn’t happen much lately and I think that it’s cause I’ve been dealing with way too many intense emotions and confusion lately.
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Most of the time when I’m feeling creative I draw on paint which I honestly think I’m allot better at than writing. I …
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This poem has very good imagery and a good sense of emotion. I think this is a good piece of poetry, however you may want to change the subject matter.That is at least if your looking to get it published in just any book of poetry. I would suggest that you at least, be a little less graphic and possibly a little more metaphoric. Alisa
This little story is really cute,and I think it would make a really good children's book. It would need the right pictures of course. However I'm not sure that having the kids sneaking out at night is such a good idea.No kid over six maybe not even over five will want to read/have read to them this story and kids under six are very impressionable. You wouldn't want some four year old kid sneaking out at night to play in the rain would you? Maybe have them get caught or just simply have their ...
your poem is pretty good I mean I really liked it when I finally figured out where to pause to make it flow right It's really short and there are two run on sentiences one of which is really long in it so here they are oh and if your not sure what a run on sentience is this whole section of this review is a really really long run on sentience If you fix the run on sentiences and the last part of the last line this poem will be quite good, Good luck I can only stare through the foggy windows a...
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