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AGE: 23
LOC: Puerto Rico
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 08

A Person That Says Life Is Art,
A Person That Says I Got The Talent To Live.

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Poetry / "Sunlight Shine"
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The grass is green, the far horizon light, the sun is far, yet straight down the way this time. The grass is wet, the land's encased by white, a mirage I know I could go through, but self humid, cold, frozen... My sight blurs, the sky cries but still shines, warm red comes down my mind. I'm confused, I feel numb, people say I'm gone, and I say no! I still feel, I still remember, I'm still here... And as I promised myself day by day, I'll always be by your side.
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Poetry / "To You."
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"To You." Something is missing, something that fades away with time... There’s our innocence, withering like a rose in the book of our lives, never to grow up again, never to regain its color, even if we make it rain... even if we smile like childs to it just like before. Never seen it like that? Lets have a race to the swings, now you can see what I can see? The way you shed that tear, that way I did it till this day, wishful... Craving for all these "small things...
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"The Vampire And The Witch" Engrave the silhouette of our passion in ashes, on a blanket made of roses, the burning desire of lust. Burn the witch and the Succubus, I'm burning inside! To embrace the sins and desires, Just a breath for the curse. Not blind for the beauty, not deaf for the sirens chant. Dispel my endless, the full moon stands bright, Compel the curse! I can see the stars... For what but compassion!? May the roses disguise the wine, the blood that comes down...
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"Those who cannot give deep emotions neither can feel deep emotions, because that's as far as their hearts can give." -Alexander Arciel "Creo que lo mejor que un ser humano podria preguntarse en la vida es como podria ser mejor ser humano." -Alexander Arciel "Our mind is the pandoras box no one will ever decipher, time changes its possibilities." -Alexander Arciel  
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"Lies only feed from the fool, the one who trusts, and the liar itself." -Alexander Arciel "Evil is just a point of view, but fear always makes the difference." -Alexander Arciel "The MOST WORTHY of things never rot." -Alexander Arciel
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Poetry / madhouse.
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I Think It's Pretty Well Done, This Is Not The Kind Of Things I Usually Read, Even Though I Like It.
I Like Everything About It, How It Flows, Every Character Has A Good Exposure.
Poetry / Bio Poem-Truth
I Caught The Message In It, It's Good. The Only Thing Is That The Commas And Punctuations Are Missing, That Can Make It More Readable.
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