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AGE: 22
LOC: Haverhill, MA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 24

My name is Alex.

I’ve written quite a number of short stories, some of which are posted here. I like to think my pieces are unique and offer something a little different than everything else out there.

I’m also working on a novel called “Island of Paradise”.

Hit me up on Myspace: www.myspace.com/itsclassicalanyways

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Short Story / XYZ
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After many discussions the couple finally decided to have children. “We’re starting to get old,” the wife said. The husband agreed, cigar hanging loose in his mouth, “it’s now or never.” They made love like prom night, raw, his kisses were sweat and his muscles bulged. As he collapsed beside her she turned to him. “Do you think this will work?” He kissed her between the eyes, drips of his sweat still running down her forehead and onto her nose. ...
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Short Story / Devour
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The fork plunged into her arm, and as I raised the knife to cut out a piece of flesh, she moaned with desire. With the delicacy of a newborn I slowly lifted the fork to my mouth and began chewing as she watched with a ravenous stare. With each bite her hands slid down her chest until she met her panties and a feverous groping fiesta erupted; masturbation and mastication. With the skin swallowed I raised my eyes and spoke with in a lustful hush, “Your turn.” Her hand remained on...
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Short Story / Under The Tree
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There were echoes all around them, their shadows delirious and only existed in short spurts under the breath of the streetlights. They danced as their cigarettes leaked calligraphy across the night sky and she tried to trace it with her finger. He asked her what it said and she replied “it’s a secret to the stars.” The smoke towered over them for a few moments, observing before dissipating into the darkness and she took the cancerous pen to her lips to write some more. There was a light veil...
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Short Story / Red Balloons
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She was surrounded by wrinkly skin and the memories escaping from their false teeth. Towering over them in their shrunken elderly stage as they clasped their hands around her waist and smiled, telling her that only yesterday she was a little girl. Around them all was a forest of lawn chairs and tables, plastic bowls of potato chips and fruit, coolers of soda and a grill overloaded with hamburgers and hotdogs. Tied to each chair and strewn all over the porch were white balloons. The plan had ...
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Short Story / Pieces of Glass
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Mom says it hurt like a bitch to push me out of her. My arm was broken and she took me to a glassblower who blew a new one for me. “You’re lucky I’m a good mother,” she says. I’m upstairs with my boyfriend Andrew; he’s lying on my bed while I try on new clothes. “So you could like go back to that glassblower and have him blow you bigger tits or something right?” I throw a rumpled shirt at him, “shut up.” He laughs and it’s so cute I laugh too. “What’s wrong with my tits?” I ask, and I shake ...
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Short Story / CAKE STALLS AND RAFFLES
This was an enjoyable piece to read. The voice is well done and believable. You do a good job of taking us into this woman's head, giving us the thought running through it, who she is and what she does. Though I slightly suspected in the end she would steal the recipe and not the jewelry, it was still satisfying to see it end in that way. That was where the humor of it all came full circle. This piece seems quite polished. The only real mistake I picked up on was at the very end. Instead of "...
Short Story / HappyVille
There were a lot of grammar mistakes in this. A lot of your sentences either need commas or some form of punctuation. And then other parts are just awkwardly worded such as "I could talk of none but good for I had checked my baggage at the door." It would be better as "I could talk of nothing but good things for I had..." There wasn't really much of a conflict or much going on. And with the end having been made Happy Ville only a dream left me really unsatisfied. I wanted the narrator to actu...
Short Story / february fifteenth
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Short Story / Innocence
This is an incredibly short piece, but I feel like this could be part of a longer piece. You give us small details in a limited space and it certainly creates a certain mood. I was a bit confused as to who exactly was saying the last sentence, was it the narrator or the girl from the blog? I was left wanting to know more about this girl and why her words affected the narrator in such a way. You should play around with this and see what happens. I'm intrigued, but not fully satisfied.
Short Story / Beginning of a story
It is hard to judge something that is a mere two sentences but it certainly sounds like an interesting start. I would suggest where you say "I shook the doctor's left with mine," to add in "left hand". It sounded a bit awkward to me to simply say left. I'm curious as to how this will pan out.
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Short Story / The Clockwork Girl
Short Story / Finding Peace

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