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AGE: 21
LOC: Kapolei, HI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 06

My name is Ace Gowan and under the guidance of God, I pray to become a published author in both poetry and fiction.  I also strive to be as good a critic as I am a writer so feel free to ask for a review and please be kind enough to leave one for me.

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Poetry / My Taste of Ink
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My Taste of Ink ............ The sky at my feet, I overhear mountains debate Whether I should Carve my eyes out Or grow a mustache. Instead, I’ll hang my Head on a clothesline And gain some weight Practicing an emotional diet So I can try to vomit The poison that’s still inside me. Call it a disorder, But I now take daily baths With hallucination Because I am constantly Sweating out my desires, Still asleep in the sauna That are our soul’s made. .. .. I celebrate Because I o...
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Words circulate these veins. I bleed from the mouth With each cut to my senses. My hand breathes the air that turns our touch to red. Speak no more she said. The translation burns with Every beat of my heart Causing these eyes to cry songs, Reaching till my skin Has something to say. Speak no more she said. Drag me by the soul Till change falls like rain And fills my lungs, but Hold my tongue because Scars can't move on. Speak no more she said. Drown every inch of me In conversations I've nev...
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Thoughts Do Dwell I feel its trite to die again, though my heart exhales to breathe you in, and time is but another trend as my life defines the meaningless. I watched her the way colors sing for the deaf. Now I see how it bleeds to be blind. Even before touch, You've built dimensions in me. My world is barren now, but with clouds for footholds, there is no choice but to fall towards when My eyes could dream you to pieces, just to see what heaven was made of. Like remembering what never happe...
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They say people don’t change. You see we go both ways. And I think. And I think. And I can’t stop thinking. What have you done to me? I’m not who I was or used to be. Is this called moving on? Is this called moving on? I’ve been so scared lately, Without yours, my hands are shaking. Oh baby, I’m taking too long to live Said you loved me one day. Now we’re running away. And I feel. And I feel. And I can’t stop feeling. What have I done to you? You’re not who I loved or then once knew. Is this...
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We have traveled all routes of existence and never have I set foot upon more beautiful a scene than its First and Final Destinations.
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Interesting. I am fond of your style but the content is another story. I think this piece was hard for me to relate with and that may have something to do with it, but either way there are bits and pieces which I thought could use some work. The word months is misspelled, the incorporation of a conversation with your daughter then moving onto thinking about someone else could use a better transition. I did not particularly like the use of the word 'semen.' This is as far as I could offer for ...
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I liked this piece. In my eyes it was very 'real' and 'genuine.' Though you did use some age old descriptions youd didn't lose the heart of your words, your heart that thought of these words I should say. I think you did a good job with the descriptions, I could imagine every bit of what you were saying and had no real trouble with anything. The one suggestion that I'd like to make is with the ending. I definitely feel that you ended much to abruptly and suggest that you add a little more to ...
Romance / A Man Set Apart
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