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LAST LOGIN: June 29
LAST LOGIN: June 29
I’m nineteen years old and I mainly write original fantasy stories. I am currently working on what I’m hoping will be the first in a series. It’s 94 (well, 95 if you count the less than a page first page of chapter six which is all I’ve written of it so far) hand written pages (I write it out first then type it every few pages). I mainly only post it on Livejournal in friendslocked posts, though, so if I do post anything from it, it will be protected. I’ve also written Star Wars fan fiction for a number of years so I’ll be posting that.
I have a bunch of Livejournal communities/a message board, so if you’re curious for the links, please let me know. You can IM me on AIM at JedioftheFlame, or email me at AWritersFantasy@gmail.com.
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It’s been ten years since you died. Ten years since the battle that seemed to last for hours yet went by in minutes. It was a battle between good and evil, brother against brother. And I was unable to save you, Father. I know it wasn’t my fault. I know that if I had the power of healing, I would have healed you instantly, and everything would have been all right, but it didn’t work out that way. I wasn’t much of a fighter back then, and that hasn’t changed. Before I go any further, I should t...
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Hmm. Overall, it was an interesting story. You keep using "dragon" and "dragoon," though. Do you mean to do that, or do you really mean to put "dragon"? Also, do dragons smile? I wouldn't really think so. Other than those things, it was good. I'd like to see more.
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This needs some work with some commas and stuff. Honestly, I'm not even sure where the story is going, but I think that comes from not reading part one. Either way, it needs some work here and there...
o.o Woah. This was interesting, and really reminded me of the SAW movies. Other than a few places needing commas and some other things here and there, this was really well written, and I like the twists you added to it. Have you seen the SAW movies? If you haven't, I suggest watching them (they're rather gorry, though), because I think you'll see the similarities in this.
Wow. I love the metaphore you brought in this, and the description was awesome. I especially love that last sentence. Good job!
This was awesome. Other than a few typos here and there, I loved it, and thought you did an awesome job. I especially love the way you ended it. There's some places where you need to rearrange some stuff like "In the throne sit I" should be "in the throne I sit." Other than those things, good job.
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