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AGE: 25
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 08

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Short Story / The Writer's Life
Version 1
14 Reviews   3 Comments
I give my life for theirs
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Version 1
12 Reviews   4 Comments
Build a world... forsake this one?
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Short Story / My Friend William
Version 1
6 Reviews   8 Comments
They said I was a peace maker. Huh, what did they know? I was seven years old when I first killed a man. I could tell you that William made me do it and I wouldn’t be lyin’ none. But the truth is I killed him because it’s what I do. XXX “Hey Kid. That’s right am a talkin’ a you! Don’chu walk away from me boy.” Frank wasn’t always an asshole, but he was an outright bastard to William. There was jus’ no point in trying to talk the ol’ man out of it. So I just kept quiet. “What’s it gonna be kid...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Of Prophets - Chpt1 - Complete
Version 10
9 Reviews   4 Comments
Through the fusillade of rain, the lifeless form in the alleyway drew his eyes magnetically. Two large ravens postured on top of it. Wings outstretched, they defended their claim. It was clearly too late to help. The once lilac dress and pretty white bonnet appeared grubby but dry, thanks to the overlapping roofs above. He wasn’t far from home, and this was his route to work. Perhaps he would recognise her up close. Gingerly, Campbell began to move closer. A curtain of dark hair had escaped t...
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Novel Treatments / The Way South: Chapter 1
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Non-fiction / Go for it.
Amusing but not necessarily working on lots of levels. it doesn't really tell a story so much but i think we all know the feeling and there's definately a unifying feeling there.
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Yeh not bad... I like. Not exactly deep or working on many levels like I think this really needs to but it's certainly a very decent stab mate. Nice one
Short Story / MacMemoir
surely it's McDonalds. Go figure should be a seperate sentence. Doesn't have me thinking at all...
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Novel Treatments / D&R intro

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