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four legs stand four arms fold two people
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a conversation... she strokes his long, curly hair in admiration
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Before I saw this girl, this sweet, precious-looking girl, I have never seen a girl, not one girl in my life, who could take my heart and run away with it. This girl didn't do anything, she was just there. And there I was, blown away.
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picking up a chair placing its legs on the wall-- the damage is done
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snow flurries falling, landing down on my left shoe and other places
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This haiku paints a picture of a moment in time, even though it's not 5-7-5, it doesn't have to be. Some people die this way, unfortunately, especially in the Middle East. It's well said, and needs no more words.
The haiku you wrote here sounds pretty cool. The words go almost like a slam poem or a hip-hop song the way it's written. Well done.
That's a beautiful piece of writing. The words are arranged in a beautiful manner. Well written and well done.
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