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AGE: 25
LOC: New Braunfels, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 05

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Short Story / Five Joints
Version 2
7 Reviews   0 Comments
The morning lights reflect off the water in the pool and in through my window, leaving a blanket of light and motion stretched across the whole of my ceiling as though it were a car at night in constant passing. Some force has been keeping my mind at constant alert as of late; some demon of my subconsious, welling up from my seeded past... or future... or where-the-fuck-ever. Damn, this has to be my fifth joint. I can't stop shaking. I want to make sense of the violent scene before me. Searc...
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Version 1
7 Reviews   3 Comments
Ahmend was a reasonablly intellegent man (or, at least, he liked to think so) who longed to be more than punctuation upon the pages of history. He saw himself as having unique talents and an independant strength that would carry him to the greatness he sought. In actuality, his talents weren't as unique as he'd let himself believe. Those who knew him thought him a self-centered, narssasistic asshole who needed a healthy dose of reality in his diet, and a lot less junkfood. Other's opinions, ...
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Short Story / I Hate Days Like This
Version 2
6 Reviews   3 Comments
I stepped outside this morning into one of the most ugly and depressing days in recent history. The sun was two clicks east in the sky. Morning dew was still evaporating off the half-cut, overgrown lawn. A warm 85 degrees and rising. Not a cloud in the sky. I hate days like this. I've got to go up the street to meet a delivery boy. When you live at the ass-end of nowhere, no one wants to take the time or effort to find your house, especially not the Hispanic Pot Dealers Association of Americ...
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Short Story / I Hate Days Like This
Version 1
6 Reviews   2 Comments
I stepped outside this morning into one of the most ugly and depressing days in recent history. The sun was two clicks east in the sky. Morning dew was still evaporating off the half-cut, overgrown lawn. A warm 85 degrees and rising. Not a cloud in the sky. Ihate days like this. I've got to go up the street to meet a delivery boy. When you live at the ass-end of nowhere, no one wants to take the time or effort to find your house, especially not the Hispanic Pot Dealers Association of America...
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Short Story / Five Joints
Version 1
5 Reviews   0 Comments
The morning lights reflect off the water in the pool and in through my window, leaving a blanket of light and motion stretched across the whole of my ceiling as though it were a car at night in constant passing. Some force has been keeping my mind at constant alert as of late; some demon of my subconsious, welling up from my seeded past... or future... or where-the-fuck-ever. Damn, this has to be my fifth joint. I can't stop shaking. I want to make sense of the violent scene before me. Searc...
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Short Story / The Greasy Rabbit
Mushrooms, bloody mushrooms! That's the phrase of the evening children. It's an Obsessive Compulsive perma-fucked mushroom trip. All over the phone... no more tea... and death. Slaughter that little piggy! I really, and i mean really, enjoyed this. It was.... exiting. If you keep writing, I'll definitely keep reading. Keep it up
Short Story / Montparnasse
Extremely abstract. I had to read it twice to grasp the metaphors. Well, I am a little high. Your imagery is unconventional but I really like it. I use some of the same principles. It's not really important that the reader nows the exact comparison as long as your words create the proper picture in the reader's head. I really liked it. Keep it up
Short Story / Sanumá
It was dark yet enlightening. You spoke of concepts very foreign to my way of thinking and, reflectively, my writing. Understandably so, however. I always enjoy when someone can invoke thoughts that differ from that which shape my life from day to day. I believe that your work can translate, not just in words but across cultures nicely.
Limericks / I Killed a Limerick
Dead... ha. I was under the impression the'd be more, but suprizingly, I'm in no way disappointed that there wasn't
Short Story / The Discovery (Revised)
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