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Another Friday night and another engagement at the Docks SoccerWorld Indoor Soccer league. It would be the beginning of the second session, the sixth the Hog will participate in and an opening match tilt against a team known to feature up and coming talent and copious amounts of energy in the form of Penalty Shot. Prior to game time however some changes were due… The oft injured Sean “Shleppy” Thomas, under doctor’s recommendations would sit this session, allowing ‘free transfer’ Jav Martinez...
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Be brutally truthful... I'm a big boy, slightly overweight, pun intended.. but can take it or will have to learn to. That I had no predisposition or preparation in writing this musing of my too idle mind, or that what was intended to be a helping hand to a friend dealt a mixed suit of unrelated cards...it was clear now that with account created and virtual quill a quivering, I'd taken the first hesitant steps into the world of writing. I won't be a pretender to the throne quite so quickly as ...
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Very nice pace to the piece. I liked the wood hitting bone allusion and it would have been nice to get some more meat behind the reconciliation of what happened although I imagine that will be coming in subsequent pieces. I did not find the arousal in the dumpster events to be particularly believable. I 'see' a person flopping around and possessing the strength to heave themselves out of a dumpster but then comically not able to stand and still wend his way, broken arm in tow, to 'present him...
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