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AGE:
24
LOC: San Bernardino, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 25
LOC: San Bernardino, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 25
I am a strong female who believes in living life to the fullest. I am married with a 4month old son and a 4yr old step daughter. I Live for my family and I will do anything I can to ensure their happiness. I feel that no matter what you are feeling, you have to express it to own it. I have gone through many things in the past and I tend to feed on that. Most of my writing is just something I write down quickly as I feel it off the top of my head. If just one person can benifit from what I have been through than great, if not thats okay too.
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Marriage is very rewarding and difficult at the same time, you have your ups and downs and sometimes you’re just not sure where you stand. Being married with a new baby can be traumatic all in itself; but being married with a new baby, a drama queen baby’s mother, and living with your mother in-law can have you ready to hang yourself. I knew that marriage takes work and I knew it wouldn’t be easy having my husband’s ex-wife always around because of his daughter, I even knew that parenting wou...
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Fuck everyone for what they think; mindless drones are useless in my world of thought. If I could kill them all in a bloody rage I would paint the world red. When thoughts of death fill your mind and all you can hope for is to wake up to another pointless day, you wonder why you continue. When your dreams become nightmares and all you know is pain, you forget what happiness is and lose yourself in another world. You have become everything you stand against and find yourself fighting others w...
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Why do men say that they want a good woman, but date whores? I think that there is confusion when it comes to what men really want. They want a woman to cook, clean, and stay home with the kids, yet they date women who will sleep with anyone and party all night long. I would like to offer my opinion on the situation from personal experience both as a woman and someone who has discussed the situation with many different types of men. First off let’s talk about what a good woman is. A good woma...
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Let it out Burn the bridge Don’t need anyone Fuck this shit Burn it all down Drowning in the blood Lost to the world A fight till the death Rise above Stronger than before Never quit Fuck the world Will overcome all Take the pain Show you who I am Always more to be had
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I’m tired of being just another bitch Another woman on your list You say you love me but that’s not true The only person you care about is you I have been here when you need me But you can’t seem to see I love you more than life Yet you refuse to make me your wife You lied to me when we met I guess you thought I’d forget You told me you wanted only one But you must just say things for fun I’m beginning to see That the life I dream of will never be You are only out to serve yourself Only out f...
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There are quite a few large word in there that I had some trouble pronouncing, but that is usual with me. I think that you are really on to something; well written and a good story plot. I would love to read more!
Well written, dark and mysterious. I like it very much.
This is very beautiful and poetic. The way you describe emotions here as both good and bad, sweet and bitter is perfect. I think you have tapped into a level of emotional maturity that most never find. You are a true writer with an unbelievable talent and I would love to read more. This is truly inspirational and a great read.
This is a very good poem, to be honest I don't see the humor in it. It is well written and had a great flow, overall it was an enjoyable read.
Beautiful descriptions of these plastic, fake, and airbrushed females that surround us. I believe that this poem will touch all the real females out there. I have felt the same things without being able to put them into non aggressive words, you took the words right from my heart. Great job and I would love to read more of your writing.
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